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Jfp's avatar

I’m glad something tugged Elise that he would remember his childhood.This story’s ends in suspense so that the readers are eager to know what’s coming.This and Eli’s feeling thrilled me as it gave me a feeling of a mysterious track which Eli had to walk so overall I think it was a pretty good poem and fantastic

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The boy's story is somewhat touching.

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